| Reviews for Simple Survival |
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   winddemon199 chapter 14 . 8/12/2014 I'd be like why the fuck should I care about someone I don't even know. |
| oxybusy chapter 1 . 2/6/2010 Yay a rewrite, thank god it's not disbanded. |
| njking24 chapter 3 . 12/18/2009 intrestin continue it or i will hunt you down and force you to watch as i torture you precious people to death ;) just kiding :( or am i |
| Leaprechaun1 chapter 17 . 10/13/2009 Are you going to be taking down the chapters and putting the new ones up or are you going to be posting a new story altogether? |
| The Unknown Shinobi chapter 17 . 10/5/2009 Sadly this story is a tire wheel traveling downhill. It was really exceptional in the beginning, but as chapter 15 & 16 rolled around, it was hard to keep my interest. My advise is that you revise them a bit because some of the sentences are a bit confusing, and the flow of them are a bit choppy. Other than that, could you explain what happened to Kyuubi's reiatsu? Also, could you explain what the deal with Minato's was as well? |
| puffdadder chapter 17 . 9/25/2009 it isn't a bad story at all. although i wish *sniffle* that kyuubi didn't die. maybe if you did decide to write it, don't have kyuubi die... and have nel go with naruto. just a happy thought. ;) good job. |
| Mizore53 chapter 17 . 8/31/2009 I agree. This story was decent, but it went more off-topic than my grade 10 history class, and believe me, that is saying something. But I think that a re-write would be good for this story and help work out the kinks |
| Shinen no Hikari chapter 16 . 7/22/2009 You really hate Sasuke that much. That's just cruel |
| Majin Gokan chapter 17 . 7/22/2009 i'm sorry to hear that you've decided to redo this story, i've quite enjoyed it so far and i look forward to when you repost i'm sure it'll be better than ever. |
| SuperiorShortness chapter 17 . 7/22/2009 As long as you don't abandon the re-write we will still love you lol :). |
| Peinx7 chapter 17 . 7/22/2009 Yeah kinda got weird after naruto was betrayed by aizen but the first parts are good |
| Rurouni209 chapter 17 . 7/22/2009 I thought this story was rather good compared to some of the real garbage I've seen out there; it might be disjointed but there's good editing, the author actually cares about the story (esp. if you're going to re-write it because you want to make it better), and you actually have a good idea to work with. A lot of fics don't have that. GL on the new version ) |
| Silver Shadowbreeze chapter 17 . 7/22/2009 Wait, are you going to repost in this story or repost it separately? Shadow |
| Double-Portion chapter 17 . 7/22/2009 Oh well! D |
| kamrin1530 chapter 17 . 7/22/2009 ok ... I didnt think it was written bad at all but if you want to rework it Ill be waiting to see more |
