please more

I liked this one a lot, u did a wonderful job :) its a story u can get into

Where. Are. Your. Reviews? This was a great piece of writing! It's one thing to read something...it's another thing to FEEL it as its happening. The sweat, the breathlessness, the pounding of blood in your ears - you brought me there, to that chase. And loved the innuendo of the ending.

Great job.