I like how you how both perspectives of how they met. Got to see each of their emotions and thoughts during that time. Great fic!

It's so should write example write another chapters and say how their first kiss happened and how their make love or if you don't like sexual stuffs like me you can write how they met Cullen are some idea's that came to my you can add something else.

Wonderful. Alice is my favorite vampire ever and Jasper/Alice is so much more adorable than Bella/Edward or Jacob/Bella. It's so nice especially the way you write it.

I loved it, very cute,

that was interesting.

I just wanted to point out that quite a few of your facts are, actually, incorrect.

Alice found Jasper before she found the Cullens, so she would not have had a last name. She would have just been "Alice". Secondly, this would mean she didn't have a family yet, because the two of them look for the Cullens together.

Otherwise, good job.

Very nice, the only thing is that alice meets Jasper before she meets the Cullens, and they're together for...I want to say about ten year, but I'm not positive, and then they finally find the cullens

With some editing, it could have been better but a good read anyway. THnaks for writing and continue.

So Cute. I loved It. JK. I'm sorry, you probably hate me now. It was just too tempting.

I think that having it be so short was beneficial in a way. I dnt kno how but I intend on finding out.

A good start, very believable. But, the two different perspectives, Jasper's and Alice's, were too similar and not needed. You really weren't "inside" their heads, so to speak. Not that you need to be to tell the story, but if that's the case, don't bother with the separate perspectives.

I would really like to see this continued!

GAHH! I've been looking for a JasperAlice forever! I have a soft spot for Jasper... And this really does him justice. I'm glad I immediately thought of you once I had all but given up hope for finding well-written fics in the Twilight section. Well, I'm new to the Twilight series, and have only read up to New Moon. And so far, I detest Jacob. But I digress.

This was wonderful. Seriously. Not lying. Honestly. :) So going into my faves.

Wow I really liked it - Alice and Jasper would definitely have a "wierder" first relationship. My only thought... you had Alice reference her brothers and Rosalie... was she thinking in the future? Because I don't think she had joined the family 'till after she was with Jasper. Really good, please continue!

PS: If you've got extra time, I'd love a review, too! ;)

This was great I normally don't like Alice/Jasper pairings but I like this one. I think that it could be even better if you add Jasper's power to his POV.

Alice doesn't know Rosalie yet. I don't think that Alice thinks of Rose as a sister yet ... but what do I know? Just wondering if that was your intention.