You know libraries suck when you enjoy a fanfiction WAY more then a published book. I STAYED UP till 5 in the MORNING to finish this beautiful piece! I loved it so much and I just want you to know that you're writing is helping me through a LOT of things. 3 thx mate!

I started happily screaming like a weirdo when I read Alexis quoting the Bible. I have no idea why, I just thought it was really cool! Hats off to you mate!

God, I love the idea of Alexis slapping out "Genesis" to explain to Bumblebee why humans wear clothes XD

Whoa. This is amazing. I love this story. I love the relationships and plot and pacing. So good.

Loved this!

I was feeling really afraid that there wasn't going to be a sequel... but then I checked your profile! Soooo relieved right now!

ok that's unfair... bumblebee started it... if i was alexis, i would be more mad at bumblebee for interfering like that... it shows a lack of respect for alexis, actually.. not allowing her to make her own life choices. though i would still be a little mad at starscream for not stopping when i asked him to.

Hitler's ghost... lmao,,,,

omg bumblebee is too freaking adorable.

i screamed out loud & scared my old, partially deaf dog awake. lol

Barricade's motivations & thoughts are very interesting. You don't see a character like this explored very often. Well done.

hahah i love cyclonus. more of cyclonus!

woah... that's a creepy dream. very well written. it actually has a dream-like quality to it. a lot of ppl suck at writing dreams, but you don't. ;P

Lol " because I was desperate for a spark-mate" poor poor Barricade. About died laughing so hard.

Love how you did Barricade in chapter 4 he's my favorite decpticon an like how you kept his attitude in chacator