This was awesome! I love your stories with Fujiwara and Fubuki

iloved it

I don't think there are a lot of words to describe this other than "wow". I like the style, I like how the flashbacks set up things, and the thought of them *coughs* "losing track of time" is just wonderful. I love the 'possession' angle, too, it fits in my opinion. As far as I can tell you got the characterizations right, which I don't find nearly enough in GX fanfic.

Well done.

I am impressed! I think you did a good job with this - a nice bit of characterization and emotion in a small space. A bit dark for my personal taste, but you pulled it off with panache and I respect you for it. Well done.