| Reviews for They Just Stop Looking |
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Black Fungus chapter 1 . 8/16 This was a good read. Thanks |
Jenjoremy chapter 1 . 7/19/2018 Very cool research on Lilith and I notice you posted this before she actually appeared on the show, so extra cool! |
thepurplewriter333 chapter 1 . 3/1/2018 Beautiful story, loved it. Thank you. :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/27/2017 I love this |
csarbani14 chapter 1 . 11/22/2017 I loved the quote from the show. That they just stop looking. Great piece. |
lanri chapter 1 . 3/10/2016 Soooo I've been stalking your work forever and love everything about it. With this fic though, I've always desperately wanted Sam's side. Would it be okay if I tried my hand at writing it? (i totally understand if you wouldn't want me to, I won't be hurt if you say no). Thanks :) |
LunaBianca chapter 1 . 2/15/2016 I really like this. The way you open with Dean a town regular and off to work before explaining why he's got a Mayberry groove...Well done. |
Toothtooth chapter 1 . 9/19/2015 Awwwww this is so nice |
RobotRollCall chapter 1 . 5/29/2015 The line about Sam curling his hand around Dean's finger like he did when he was a baby...That's just them in two sentences, and there's something beautiful about it. |
Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 1/29/2015 Poor Sam and Dean... being separated for 1 month and two days. Whom or What was the Lilith or a Lilith ? Anyway, it was Great... I'm so glad Sam is fine now... There's a tiny short hope that Dean really kill her just to make sure she's gone. But if she really would end up dead anyway, it was still okay... |
NoilyPrat chapter 1 . 12/25/2014 A whole month of looking - wow, how hard that would be on Dean. Strange, having him with a "normal" job, but I understand you do what you have to do. So, birthday is May 2nd - Sam missed it after all. Drats. |
sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 3/26/2013 This story was also written before another Lilith came into play. Man, Sam just doesn't have a good track record with Lilies, does he? Anyway, I really like what you did with this version of a Lilith. And Dean getting a job and going the whole nine yards to find Sam because he would if it was the last thing he did. And I like that Sam was the one who killed Lilith, despite being down he was /not/ out for the count. |
T.L. Arens chapter 1 . 10/1/2012 Wow! I wish I had time earlier to read this story, but I'm also glad I waited. What a treat! I loved how you made sure the reader understood that Dean hunted a long time to find Sam. I felt the length of time by the way you added details to the search. And it was beautiful when Dean found his little brother. I'm glad, too, that Dean did not just off Lilith. Not because her death would have killed Sam, too, but because Dean was willing to let her suffer that much longer and I think it made him the bigger person. Your characters here are honest with a really nice sense of realism. They felt like people, not just images on the page. Thank you so much for the story. :) |
JaniceC678 chapter 1 . 9/28/2012 This was such a great story! Loved Dean's persistence, never giving up no matter what he might find! And Lillith? Had to stop and regroup there for a second when Dean didn't recognize the name and then I realized you pulled up that legend before the name ever became part of the show. Interesting foreshadowing there. I AM curious as to what her motivation was in just keeping Sam there...if there was no torture and no sexual assault, what was she getting out of it. (not that keeping someone chained up underground and barely feeding them isn't a form of torture in itself. I suppose that plus watching Dean's suffering might have been enough to satisfy her need to hurt men, huh?) Anyway, another great story! |
CarolAnnly chapter 1 . 8/26/2012 I must have read this 10 times over the last few years and never tire of it. Dean, never giving up, doing what he has to do until he finds his brother. One day to the next, always searching. You spin an amazing tale, lady. Thank you. |