Reviews for The Melt
DoomNinja215 chapter 34 . 7/4
RIP Pudgy
Crimson Lotus Demon chapter 34 . 7/1
Thank you. Your P.S. note brought me immense joy and entertainment. I hope you start writing again. You have some real talent and I greatly enjoy your writing.
chloevandermerwe5 chapter 34 . 6/6
Please do update soon
I really like this story
TheSummerSet chapter 34 . 6/2
This author's note is a total lie. You definitely abandoned it my diddle nugget. And yes I'm purposely being an ass in an effort to make you write a chappie outta pure retaliation with a scathing response.
darkfanghatake chapter 21 . 5/8
U should have made Zabuza give his sword to naruto
narutouzumaki9718 chapter 34 . 5/5
Update? This is a great story!
Guest chapter 34 . 5/1
Good we will be looking forward to the next chapters
NathanielTheCat chapter 34 . 4/8
This was good.
Aselo chapter 14 . 4/7
I can go read the next chapter and that cliffhanger was still brutal. You sadist
Velin63 chapter 34 . 4/3
update please this is really good
Guest chapter 12 . 3/30
First of all thinking using shika shadow bind to use naruto to kiss hinata was great and all as almost saying forcing your mom to kiss your bestfriend and make out with him. I like a good story but dont ruin it into a forcing nature to a limitation. Sorry for being a dick but by as the admentment I i can say what i want of it.
Shinigami.yame chapter 10 . 3/9
Is shougi chess
KaylaWilton chapter 34 . 3/1
This is an amazing story, and I must say that I loved your end comment on that last chapter haha. I love how you stick up for yourself and basically tell everyone to fuck off when they deserve it
Thanks for writing and posting such a beautiful Fanfiction for us to read!
UK Laisz chapter 29 . 3/1
So Hiruzen knew Orochimaru was going to attack Konoha and he didn't assign any ANBU to defend his family? You do realise that the whole family is very important because of Hiruzen being the Hokage, right? You made a point earlier about why Naruto's heritage couldn't be revealed because his parents had many enemies and yet right now, you're completely ignoring the fact that Hiruzen's entire family was in the very same risk of being captured or murdered?

This could have been done so much better but you fucked it up. And you're completely forgetting the fact that Konoha has protocols in case of an attack like protection of important people, evacuation of civilians. When Konoha is attacked the first priority will always be the current Hokage's family because they can be used as a leverage against the Hokage.

I was beginning to like your concept of Naruto doing his own thing without others forcing him too. But you had to do this
Guest chapter 34 . 1/30
Hello, I must say I am a lazy person. I don't often read anything over 90k words because the stories usually get boring and the plot overused. However your story which was far longer was interesting and kept me engaged so that before I knew it I had read all 282k words and loved it. I say to you to all the people who say that you can't write I say screw them the fact that you kept someone who has read hundreds if not thousands of stories on here interesed enough to finish it is a feat you should be proud of.

Thank You for the wonderful story and keep writing amazing things for people to enjoy forever.
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