Nice! I can imagine it being part of the movie

That is really, really good.

-foams at mouth-

i love this mucho

very lovely. an interesting way to describe how the general populace is feeling, it turned out very well. m63

This poem is piercing. I like the rhythm and the tension of it. I felt like the phrases and people were swirling in my head as I read it.

Beautiful work.

Thank you for sharing with us.

-Vaelru-