I thought this was really good, Matt's my favourite Death Note character and you wrote him perfectly. I especially loved the ending, I always sort of imagine that when they're alone, Mello isn't always the tough Mafia guy he acts like. This was really great and very well written. Definitely a favourite.

wow :P matt has always been my favourite character, and i think you've definitely done him justice in this story (only six reviews?) you totally deserve more that that _

For a first in a fandom, very nice. Addiction is a very delicate subject, and you did it nicely. I felt like i was Matt for a section in the middle, which is always good.

That was good. You managed to get Mello to act caring while keeping him in character as well, quite the accomplishment. Good job

Omg! That was awesome! So sweet of Mello to get Matt's game station fixed and just well show he cared... Aw... So cute! Poor Matt, though. He had such a rough day.

Sorry for not loging in but I gotta go to school soon so this will be quick.

This story was excellent, and I do believe that they were in character. To me, Matt is a guy who never tells anyone how he feels and Mello is the guy who doesn't care how anyone feels. Besides the friendship the 2 of them have I'm sure that it's not easy at all and that's hard to write, so I congratulate you.

And I understood the whole cigarrete thing. Sometimes you need a grasp of reality when everything is going downhill for you... even if that grasp of reality comes in the form of a cigarrete. Good job

Read ya' later

Tbh, I think they were kept excellently in character. Well done. n.n

The illusion metaphor for cigerettes is one of I've not heard before. But it's interesting. :3

Pretty good but, I dunno, I'm not sure if it turned out how you wanted by what you said in your notes. I mean, the illusion thing... I have never smoked cigarettes so I don't know if you have to to see the idea but I just don't see it. If you hadn't said anything about it in your note I would've been like huh? at the last line, although I still sort of am. Maybe it's sort of there but not enough, you know? At least not for me.

I can't say whether it's ooc or not but I liked how you referred to Mello in about.. the middle of the fic. :0)