Reviews for Mr Loser
discreetfrog11 chapter 5 . 4/27
can i call Edward a dung beetle now? he is an idiot.
Jamyla Jones chapter 5 . 4/25/2019
AY!
KoverKat08 chapter 11 . 10/18/2018
What a wonderful story. I am so glad everything turned out perfectly. And I'm glad Edward went back to his adorable geeky self. I liked him better anyway.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2018
lol what... this is a bit cringe, mate
Guest chapter 5 . 4/16/2015
AY AY AY AY AY AY AY AY AY AY AY AY AY AY AY AY
deadliness chapter 4 . 4/16/2015
reshedule party is what id do
deadliness chapter 3 . 4/16/2015
wow, is bella popular. and and dand adn adn adn adn adn adn adn adna and and and an dn an ana na snas ans asn and and and na dn an and an dn dad and na d:-d
deadliness chapter 1 . 4/16/2015
mommy? hes in high school
savannavansmutsmut chapter 11 . 2/15/2014
so cute!
Guest chapter 11 . 12/23/2013
So cute
vjworley chapter 2 . 7/22/2013
Emmett never used words like, " Oh my French toast in his life." He's fully masculine and a hard ass with everyone but loved ones. So is this meant to be Emmett as a teen or Emmett as a sixth grader? You have good story telling skills. But need to brush up on dialogue.

Edward as a nerd is doable. But leave him his dignity. With work this could be a great story. This is the longest review I've Ever written so I'M INTERESTED
vjworley chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
He's a in high school. not first grade lose the Mommie?
Booknotes chapter 11 . 7/20/2013
You are an AMAZING writer! The only story I haven't looked at just get is my best friend, the player. I don't know if I could handle Edward not being a virgin... *sly grin*
Motherof8 chapter 11 . 6/20/2013
What a cute, funny story. Thanks for writing it.
Motherof8 chapter 9 . 6/20/2013
Boy, he really is a geek.
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