| Reviews for Mr Loser |
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discreetfrog11 chapter 5 . 4/27 can i call Edward a dung beetle now? he is an idiot. |
Jamyla Jones chapter 5 . 4/25/2019 AY! |
KoverKat08 chapter 11 . 10/18/2018 What a wonderful story. I am so glad everything turned out perfectly. And I'm glad Edward went back to his adorable geeky self. I liked him better anyway. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2018 lol what... this is a bit cringe, mate |
Guest chapter 5 . 4/16/2015 AY AY AY AY AY AY AY AY AY AY AY AY AY AY AY AY |
deadliness chapter 4 . 4/16/2015 reshedule party is what id do |
deadliness chapter 3 . 4/16/2015 wow, is bella popular. and and dand adn adn adn adn adn adn adn adna and and and an dn an ana na snas ans asn and and and na dn an and an dn dad and na d:-d |
deadliness chapter 1 . 4/16/2015 mommy? hes in high school |
savannavansmutsmut chapter 11 . 2/15/2014 so cute! |
Guest chapter 11 . 12/23/2013 So cute |
vjworley chapter 2 . 7/22/2013 Emmett never used words like, " Oh my French toast in his life." He's fully masculine and a hard ass with everyone but loved ones. So is this meant to be Emmett as a teen or Emmett as a sixth grader? You have good story telling skills. But need to brush up on dialogue. Edward as a nerd is doable. But leave him his dignity. With work this could be a great story. This is the longest review I've Ever written so I'M INTERESTED |
vjworley chapter 1 . 7/22/2013 He's a in high school. not first grade lose the Mommie? |
Booknotes chapter 11 . 7/20/2013 You are an AMAZING writer! The only story I haven't looked at just get is my best friend, the player. I don't know if I could handle Edward not being a virgin... *sly grin* |
Motherof8 chapter 11 . 6/20/2013 What a cute, funny story. Thanks for writing it. |
Motherof8 chapter 9 . 6/20/2013 Boy, he really is a geek. |