Reviews for Sleeping Shinigami |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i loved ur story but i didnt like wher u ended it but accualy it fits. i think ur fic was great. just wish there was more. Ja _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, it has been done but, still, that was pretty good; I liked it. *thumbs up* Although the end was a bit jumbled and Heero seemed kind of OOC... Still, it was good. Ja ne. Aku Soku Zan! - Keebler \-/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eee! Very good! Surprise endings are neat! And I, for one, wasn't bothered by the fact that if he was *THAT* ill, he wouldn't have survived. :-D |
![]() ![]() ![]() A sweet story, but ewwwwwwwwwwww? Quatre leaned down and lightly kissed Duo on the lips, savoring the sweet taste. came after Duo responded this time, and vomited on the linoleum floor. with no mention of mouth rinsing and teeth brushing. ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet...very nice. Good job. _ Peece out, man |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the lawyers; they were cool! ...and Quatre was *very* brave! ...kissing a guy that just puked... I think i would've preferred Heero though... the plot doesn't flow consistantly with Quatre popping in and out like that... maybe it'd be better if you put him in a chicken suit or something... |
![]() ![]() ![]() LiCat:_ I like it... Kimo: *content smile* shonen ai... LiCat:geeze... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting, Melara. I felt so bad for Duo. And for Heero too, seems he might have a soft spot for the Shinigami pilot. You know you always give up what you love most if giving them up makes them happy. Hmmm, and that gives me an idea for a fic. Chow, Lena. |
![]() ![]() Good...wish it were longer though , and i'm pretty sure Duo would have died if the drugs were already taking affect . |
![]() ![]() ![]() IT WAS OKAY, YUKI LUKI CHAN |
![]() ![]() WAIII! ::sniffle:: And I thought it would be 1x2 for sure...how kawaii, though...Quatre and Duo...::runs to get more tissues:: Beautiful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked how you ended it : P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good good good good good good good! I love your use of angst. The title isn't lame, either! |
![]() ![]() EEEEEEEEEEEH! QUATRE-CHAN! *drools...* Me liked it! - E-mail me! Pwease? |
![]() ![]() ![]() glad someone actually used different japanese words. Heero was IC, so was Quatre. And Duo partly was to. It could have been deeper. |