Ooh, I love how Faith uses her interest in Buffy against her. Good job trying to get her out of town.

Interesting abilities you gave Kennedy. I like.

I Now she wasn't certain whether she had been seeing visions of the First or visions of the dead./I Nice.

Please finish,K.

This story definitely needs to continue.

Damnit! I really want more of this :( Like now... Please?

Hey! I just discovered your fic last night and I couldn't stop before finishing it. It's one of the best I've read in a long time. I think it may be abandonned but i just wanted to say it, in case you pass by.

Loved it. Post again soon

really enjoying and would love to read more.

You're a talented writer; I hope you update soon

Hey there. Great story! I'm really a big fan of yours. Please keep writing about Buffy and Co.

This is a great story! I hope you continue it!

Yay, I'm so very glad to see more of this its wonderful. Even though it was a while since your last update you always post suh wonderful chapters its worth the wait. I;m so glad to see a story where Kennedy is portrayed in a positive light and her character is explored more. Plus your First is so much more scary than the one in the series. This First seems like a real threat, it feels old and capable of anything. Even though its limited currently with it non corporeal status you still feels like all the knowledge it has makes it terrifying in its potential for destruction.

Can't wait for more, congrat with it all so far its amazing.

Wow, just spent the last 3hrs on this roller coaster ride...hope you'll finish it? Great work

I adore this story its my personal favourite Kennedy story. I love the direction you are taking, the first actually seems menacing in this, and like it has capabilities instead of just being useless like it seemed in the series. I love it using the scythe as a weapon for itself as well as for the slayers. I look forward to new chapters, good luck its wonderful so far.

This is definitely the best rewrite of Season 7 that I have read. Love seeing a favourite character of mine (Kennedy ) get a major role too! Great seeing the interesting parts of Eli and Tara, who seem rather unique as dead people here.(sounds insensitive put that way but I don't mean it to lol). And what a cliffhanger with the ocean! I really can't wait to see where this goes still. Truly amazing storytelling!

Wow, what a chapter. Just to whom does the ocean belong to? Why didn't the First take over Eli in real life since he was already a ghost?

Argh. Please update soon. I want to know who pulled Kennedy under.

Normally I don't like AU but this is actually pretty good. Keep it up!