so beautifully written, lovely xxx

oh god. this is marvellous.

I dont write much reviews but
THIS IS AMAZAYN. Really. I love your writing style. This was beautifully written. Kudos!

That was beautiful and heartwrenching

I loved this, shame everything went wrong between them...
Great story!

I'm really disappointed in myself that some innocent, joyful part of me bloomed up in the beginning of this fic, just opening me up to that absolutely inevitable pain and heartbreak that were sure to follow.

Somehow, among the rough scratches and sweet nothings, I was made to forget what I knew and where I knew this was going and HOPE.

Stupid hope.

I think it's odd and sweet that they kissed when they were twelve.

Moves this from "need-sex-and-you're-here" to squishy warm feelings (as if that wasn't already obvious enough).

This story flowed like a bitter sweet magical string of thoughts, feelings, and needs - going from past, present, future to desire, need, and love. And I couldn't be more happy to have been taken along for the ride.

Wow. You are a one shot master! You fill your stories with so much emotion and don't make it rushed or hurried at all. They come out damn near perfect every time!

I don't think I've ever read anything written with as much feeling as your work. And that last sentence was just... amazing. :)

I am in LOVE with this pairing. And this fic. GUH, Sirius and James together is so. fucking. hot. And this fic was just intense and I love the imagery and the...verbs and the description it was SO passionate.

I mean I love me some Siremus, but the Bromance with these boys is just irresistible. They are cut from the same cloth and if not for the whole 'lack-of-Harry Potter's existence' or the stupid Voldy bit, I would peg James and Sirius as a perfect Marauder couple...or at least life-long friends with benefits :)

Smashing one shot!

*goes and stalks your other fics* :D

I really liked this story! I love how you manage the different perspectives. and although theres still that bit of tragedy, the end is sort of hopegull. I like that. you're a great writter! cheers,

Dani

This makes me so damn sad. I think you've got the combination of the urgency of the moment (in a couple of ways, ohoho) and the dead gone nostalgia for the distant past. And the level of detail only makes the "million years" seem like yesterday, while the facts of those details (and the title) highlight just how long it's been since then. Blink and you miss it, except it's tattooed to the inside of your eyelids. I am trying to say I think you did a good job, and thank you.

Absolutely beautiful.

I really love your descriptions and just about everything that you write. Something about it just blows me away every single time 3

It's really gorgeous. This was a brilliant James/Sirius 3

LyssaLaughable xD

omg you are a realy good writer! thsi is so ammazinz like professional ammazin really one? lol if ur not u shuld totally b an author cuz this was soo great and i loved the different POVs and the italics :) oh i culd go on and on! ~~JAZZYCACTUSXD

This is beautifully written. very very nice job!

this is the first fic I've ever read with Sirius x James and I must say that you've taken away all of my prejudices against the pairing! The way you mix the past and the present and the highs and the lows is amazing! It's one fantastic memory with parts of a not-so-fantastic future in it, and it's hot as hell! the story framework is great as well. keep on the good work!