I know it's been years but please continue this

WHAT R U GOING 2 CONTINUE THIS

UH oh! What's wrong with Bella? I really want to know! Keep up the good work!

Another wonderful chapter. Keep up the good work.

Another great chapter. Poor Bella was hurt by her father's harsh words. I hope they'll make up later in the story. But if they don't. . . I guess I'll just have to put up with it won't I? Keep up the good work!

Great first chapter. This is my first time reading this story and I like what I've read so far. Keep up the good work!

23,
Bella
he just but totallist Violently marked me then suddenly bit me I was going to to be a Vampire eternal inhuman stron powerful fit elegant Athletic Copassionate fierce Eat your shorts you will be Extinct in the now two thousands of years here comes a brand new ME! Hot I am BLAZING! ready or not I am burning it is spreading too soon I am frozen to the bone yes you are transitioning into a Vampire and you finalized the mating bond you will not move or so who are you you turned us we moved here and witnessed her Hello Alice this is Dawn Read Spier she is given a drug mixed with the venom prepare yourselves start your own Breeding on him then all of the sudden it is Complete she will use her blood and his senem/sperm it is called blood mating start your Brood of vampire children here taste this you will be in Pon'farr it is time of mating Then we both suddenly went int heat painless but nonbruiseable but suddenly violently but I was Breeding from him by using my blood the smart Logical way like a Vulcan wife in pon'farr what it I need to check it out on the internet then all of the suden went violent but brutal was Roaring like a Klingon woman in heat then All the sudden it was all over then reawakened together that drug worked yes both of our it's forming a child please let it work The small child Helios heed my prayers bring forth a kid like Me female make her a Hybrid with vampire blood a lot of his DNA Princess Pu' bring soul to her then a Throb came too hard I'M PREGNANT YOU DOOFUS! I Roared! Louder than normal ow you punched me it is a blessing she is a hybrid you blissed us both yes then suddenly after my tranartion/mating flew home too soon then the grand finale your child is a hybrid it is complete she blessed us with kids do you say kids oh m y god it's terrible you are with child I am fine I need oh crap BLOOD! I Zoomed anime style I gulped Animal blood from as all the boxes were from as al To present vampire way BURP! Excuse me it's more thanks a lot I am so thirsty it's one child she needs it to calm her down then all the suden I felt weirder my ryes went Golden but suddenly I felt her deep my semen/sperm more monstrous and massive but all of it vanished she is a born vampire child but some wat oh YEOW! Husband it's TIME! the Vampires bonked but she is into labor yes that drug making her a born Vampire child then my labor was painless but you are right she has Human DNA Is a hybrid born completely Vampire then she aged faster than normal but stopped growing up was a frozen teenager Of Seventeen years old looks 21 years old Golden eyes teeth Brown hair wearing clothes and shoes looked stunning then Jacon sighted her he finally Imprinted the first time they met but he met me a Vampire never had kids again sign here the treaty is now Law I broke with my pack we and the Phoenix coven did then it was done with the turned best friends with born vampire but imprinted children but it had a side affect with each races then Slipping outside with as all of them suddenly the each both Bodies of both races Expolding burst out Carnivorous as very as all of themselves and suddenly Killed us/them but both housing with their own merged with the both formed a more monstrous coven and pack but Irina was dead but it created a Carnivorous verison of her became his new wife but it had a Name Done of the Volturi with the Carnivorous verisons of ourselves and themselves burned us/them forever lost the ablity to breed so they as well adopted four hybrid teenagers but they intermated but later had kids our grandchildren and their own grand children but slipped away with us/them again twice it was poison by the Volturi but made us Immortal forever young but crashed two times but Evolved as Kindred and Interplanetary Lycans with them twice lost the ablity to breed but had as very all Eight kids but all vanished with a crashing noise but lost the blood but our new blood was Super blood never fading I feel three times stronger our skin unbreakable time to beat them who with us US! our army and a Kingdom of Kindred I used the internet the smartest way to declare Interplanetary Vampire War but had creatures into us and I was trained into combat then sent it is done then the Volturi were mightiest furious of us declaring Ritual War we were rivals enemy covens using from a Parnormal romance novel I borrowed was Sci-fi then Alice reported Volturi are coming hold on busy now and your eyes went Golden from eating at home we are War it is a good idea Momma mia it was now War Underworld Rise of the Lycans style it had begun here and Now to slay.

I really enjoy your writing. It is well rounded and a great storyline. I am so looking forward to reading more of this story. Please continue.

I so hope you update soon!

I love this chapter , it is very sweet and her sudden calmness and confidence really suits her.

I'm curious about her change and can hardly wait for her Vampire/Electa Una-abilities. They must be enormous since her powers as a weak, exhausted, dying human are impressive enough!

I don't know about you but I found this chapter very sweet. -Avi.

I haven't read any chapters for this story in a long time, so when I started reading it again, I decided to reread it all.

Anyways, it's a great fanfic and I can't wait till the next chapter.

Please update soon with a new chapter! :)

This is a really good story! Please update it! :)

great stories! ive been reading them non stop...i cant wait to see where this story goes! great job

OMC I love this story so far! X3 Its so awesome. I love the idea of it. I especially loved the seven realms of Hell thing in the first one. I love them both.

I'm dying to read more, please update soon!