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Wow, this is kewl! Continue!

Aww man...I wish she told her.

And you are officially my favorite writer.

Great job!

i've read the first part.. where's the twoshot?

I really liked all of the emotions you expressed in this chapter, I really felt like I was in the same position because it was so well-detailed.

But on the other hand, I noticed a lot of spelling errors. Well not really SPELLING errors, but where you would take the last letter of a word and it would be the first letter of the next word. And I'm sure it's just because you're typing too fast as you write, but may I suggest reading your story before posting it so you can correct any errors that you find.

But it really was well-written and I can't wait for the update!

this is really good, can't wait for the second part!

Oh sweet is this gonna continue?

OMG PLZ UPDATE SOON!

come on Lilly jsut spit it out already

Ah I need to find out what happens :)