Reviews for Writing on the Wall
TopherLoaf chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
XD
Aronim chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
That was awesome. Dumbstruck Ichigo is hilarious. You did really well.
ichirukifan chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
awesome loved the passionate kissing wish my girlfriend was like rukia make that fantasy girlfriend
darkami chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
Such a sucker for IchiRuki first kisses! This one is beautiful. Teenage melodrama overload.
ficklejam chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH /DEAD

Warm fluffy feelings in my stomach~~ /
ichirukitard chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
Awww... this was so cute and lovely; I loved it to bits! Their kisses were so sweet and nice and warm; it brought a big smile to my face. ) All in all, a wonderful well written IchiRuki's one-shot. This will go into my favorite's list. XD
m3wm3w chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
best IchiRuki one shot evar! it's just sooo them 3
Sarah Jane Shaw chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
B. E. A. UTIFUL! I adore the way you write Ichigo and Rukia it's so hard to find decent fanfic of them that's actually in character. Thank you so much for this little gem :)
VanillaTwilight4 chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
Adorable, amazing, wonderful! Loved it... the fangirl inside me had a squealing session when I read this...

You might want to think about italicizing Ichigo's thoughts though. It wasn't exactly confusing, I just think it would make it look and flow a little better. The only part where I feel it's a bit of an issue is the last line; it just feels a little weird because it abruptly switches from third person to first person back to third person. Other than that minor and unimportant detail, great story! I enjoyed it very much :)
konpeitou-chan chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
OH. MY. GOD. SOMEWHERE IN THIS FIC MY HEAD EXPLODED. the way you put words together is unlike anything... i can't even. so hard to suppress a smile right now!
XBitez chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
This story was SO sweet!
toni chapter 1 . 10/22/2009
i went to your profile page after reading your other fic ichigo's funeral, and saw that you have experience writing. it shows a lot in these fics, they're so good i can't help smiling while reading. i really like this one! i'm excited to read the others :D
MaMa HedgeHog chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
Its one of the most original, IC 'first kiss' fanfic I've ever read. The thoughts, the overwhelming thoughts, the confusion on Ichigo's part everything just seemed to fit right in. Amazing!
xBlu3-Appl3x chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
Aw. So cute. )
SecretBox chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
YAY, ICHIGO & RUKIA

Lovely, simply lovely. You do a really great job of depicting the characters aha. Everything was just perfect! They fit so amazingly well together, & it's so unique & pretty. esp, the likening to their kiss to a "mother-fucking supernova"! The end was so sweet too but without being overly so. 3

More hearts for you! XD



- Secret
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