this is extremely well written, you have amazing talent. i could use some advice for my story i did cause i wanna go over and do it again. it's called Charlie can you read it and give me feedback?

Wow... I love how you tackle the problems of a Hiro-Claire relationship, and now I'm also rooting for this pairing. XD;

Awesome story! I love HiroClaire.

Great story, really enjoyed the Hiro & Claire pairing.

Great work!

That's pretty cool. I like the playing with time elements. Sweet ending too.

I love this fic. You did a great job with this pairing. So believable.

Ok I will. I love the way you jumped back and forth, and I can't remember the last time I read a Claire/Hiro story. You should definately write more

~Me