Please come back and finish this story

It's a wonderful story and i really love it... It's a shame it's not yet updated...

I must say... I'm really really loving this story more and more with every chapter...

I really hope this is not dead. I really like this one, its one of the better. I hope to see more yet.

You're forgotten more about being a ninja than I've ever known.

Thats so ooc. Naruto saying that so sakura. Wtf.

Trigger warning: self harm.
This story contains grafic descriptions of Naruto hurting herself over a fight with Sasuke.
FIY having her almost die of exposure because she had a little fight is just bad writing.
Shocking Sasuke into good behaviour is another one of my pet peeves. It doesn't work like that. How is it his problem that his friend is so unstable she almost offs herself because they had a fight about his future?
This chapter didn't sit well with me. I get that writing gradual improvement can be boring. I just hope there won't be more of this. Alsp you should really include a trigger warning because this is self harm.

The Inari part was rushed. Not that I would have wanted that to be longer. It just seemed out of place.

Chapter 2 I think. So far so good but you overuse the word skill a lot.

hope this story will continue

please update this story soon!

Please update this story! It's awesome and you need to finish this!
Cassie07!

Just so you know, the reason someone thought you were implying something as vile as the sexual abuse of a child was because you used "little bitch" and "let's have some fun." Although I really don't understand sexualizing a child of all things, that is what it came across as. Had I not read your author's note I would have continued assuming.

If I might make a suggestion? Change "let's have some fun" to "teach her a lesson." It's not original, or exactly rational but we're talking about someone who's abusing a child, so I'm not sure that matters. You won't have the same issue with people assuming you're implying rape, and I think it gets your point across clearly.

With great diferente, one of the bests fics in this category ever. Just amazing. There is any chance of you continuing it?

I would love it if you finished this story

I want more