I loved this story. It was deliciously fluffy, and so sweet I could just scream. It was incredible and totally believable in my opinion. Keep up the good work.

o... yay, bravo! *claps* i loved this chapter with the dancing and the song. did you make up the song?

lol, nice little fairy there. good job on the chapter.

- nice start.

Oh dear...i can't stop reading such stories!well that was a happy ending!i can''t stop smiling!it was so beautifully done..the motion,the atmosphere it was brilliant!i enjoyed every line of this great piece of work

good story!

By far the best couple in FFXII and I really enjoyed this story!

I loved the song you added

Sure its Fluffy, but its the good kind of fluff

I found this cute

Aw, so cute. Is it over? I hope not...

Nice...:)

I love Ashe turning Balthier's game back on him...with sexy results! Haha. It's cute that he met her before :)

I'm surprised he dared to brush her hair out of her face in front of everyone, but he's Balthier. I always tend to skip lyrics when I read stories, so don't be offended - they tend to take me out of the moment. But I do enjoy Fran and Basch's running commentary.

I'm catching up! I love that he got her a necklace that fit the fairy tale - that's what I call devotion! Balthier always knows how to make an entrance!