Sakura is nowhere near that strong,Karin wouldn’t have been knocked out that easily,plus Karin can actually fight and she can dodge attacks because she can sense the chakra,and Sakura isn’t that smart,and unless she has the byakugou then she can’t summon cannot take Suigetsu or Jūgo,and she could never knock sasuke out,and she can’t use jutsu,and she can’t make 20 clones and she doesn’t fight with clones,Sakura isn’t that fast,and she doesn’t substitute like that,this story overestimates her,she’s not that good and Karin has chakra chains,and Jūgo could have killed her and if he wasn’t trying to then he’d have bruised her up,Sakura can’t sense chakra all that good,and Sakura is not good at taijutsu since she can’t fight at all!Plus Sakura isn’t all that cocky.

wtff

wtf

lol

aha

o.o

"Okay, Katsuya, disappear, sorry for disturbing you." - 'disappear' isn't that a bit rude in a way... You should've written "...you may go..." instead of 'disseaper'. Oh and uh you need to fix your writing (and your grammar)... the plot/idea is good but your writing is pretty bad

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no offence buuuutt ahhh...WHAT THE FUCH(learnded it from someone else who owns 'SCHOOL SWEET HELL' ) IT WAS JUST GETTIN GOOD SOOO YEAH U SHOULD B SRRY buuuut still i loove this story and KILL OFF KARIN SAKURA FOUR-EVAH

great story!, btw: it is actually spelt kunoichi not konoichi, konoichi is for a girl ninja that hasn't graduated the academy while a kunoichi has graduated.

I love your story! Please update soon! I'm on the edge of my seat! :)
I've also written a story of Sakura being the heroine, and I would just love if you would take a look at it! It's called, "My Own Curse." Please take a look at it!

exelent

hello I love your stories I'm waiting for prox

Nice story