I thought this was going to be more about the Cullens then the werewolves.

this is cute do you write anime/manga couse your a heck of a story writter

i lovelovelove your story :)

hope you continue writing ur other stories :)

quick review: i love it and i can't wai t till the next chappy

:)

awesome story :D im sad that the story ended :/ maybe you can do an epilogue for the end of this story of later on like when jacob proposes to sarah or of their wedding with the werewolves and cullens there or when they start a family of their own ;D think you can do something like that? if not maybe someone can do it for you id do it :) i just think the story would end amazingly like that so what do you think?

i love the story!

good

"And I did love him. He was after all, my soul mate." She knows him for what, 2 hours? It's so corny I'll stop reading now. Sorry, I tried, but I feel like I'm reading a story written by a 13 year old hard core Twilight fangirl. If the plot would progress at slower pace this would be a very good story! Your writing is not boring and you do not make mistakes just...let's say I'm too much of a realist to keep on reading.

omg i LUV that song! (btw i heard it frum a friend at school...

hmmm)

its great GIMMMEEE COOOKIE!

Hi. I love your story. Please please DONT STOP! it's really good!

Great story! I've caught up and I love it! Let's hope Jake will be ok!

Update soon!

first I have to say: I freeking hate cliffhangers!

not a good sign that Billy's crying... hope Jake isn't dead! otherwise I like the story, especially Jake imprinting after so long..

Awesome story when are you going to update?

GASP! NONONONO! U MUST UPDATE ASAP! I gotta know whats next!