I really love the twist on the story! Keep up the great work!

pls update the next part 2 of the story

Oh I really enjoyed this story...although the last chapter was kind of confusing at first...but I think I got it

Thx for sharing .

I loved your idea of Kagome meeting Sesshomaru first. And I was quite excited at the prospect of Sesshomaru eliminating Naraku easily before he had the Shikon but was rather disappointed. It's quite sad how the hanyou without even one shard was so adept at slipping away from Sesshomaru repeatedly. I thought may have been better having another stronger youkai as the bad guy instead of Naraku may have been better.

Kagome and Sesshomaru were also kinda meh. I didn't dislike them but I never took to either character even to the end. I was getting quite bored and was going to stop about halfway but Kei stopped that providing a bit of relief with his mischievous antics. I zapped through the rest of the story and while happy to see Kagome and Sesshomaru get together at the end, and I'm thankful you didn't turn Kagome into either a whiny weak mess or an oversensitive bitch, I would've loved to see a slightly different SessKag - personality or interaction for this story. Just a personal preference. Good on you for finishing the story though.

It breaks my heart that you won't be writing any more stories. You are a wonderful storyteller.

How cute. "Kill'em Kei"

Keep up the great work love it so very much

It was so hoooooooooooooooooot! Oh Thank you Thank you Thank you! XD

wow, i love your story! please make more sesskag pairing story :))

I love this story so much I had to red it a third time.

this kagome is a whiner, childish and demanding a very OC kagome as for sesshoumaru soince inutaisho didn't died he turned a little different.

loved it

still good as it was the first time around.

Their respective denials were especially hard to read, but the result was extremely rewarding!

Crazy good!