AxelBurnedYourToastxD

Bloody name wouldn't let me put my full name on there -.- hethan. xD
anyways this is really amusing, :D I liiiiiiiiiiike it :3 well there be a sequal to this?

I'll be honest: When Infirst read the summary, I thought I'd hate it, but I experienced the exact opposite :D I really adored this one shot; I think it may be one of he best I've read so far ;P You write Axel and Demyx quite well (as Olette, Hayner, and Pence), and an angry Roxas is kinda cute to imagine xD It was a nice setup and the ending was just the icing on the cake :P

Keep going _

~ Inita

Nya! I'm so glad my friend showed me this! This is awesome lol keep writing!

i feel like pulling an axel and roxas by saying i "hate" your story..LOL. and when i say hate, i mean, love. because i cannot even be a critique and tell you the things you could have improved on. your a damn good writer and your skills are admirable. i look forward to more great stories from you :D

oh dear XD yea, I'm so sure they hate each other XD aw XD I wanna go and hug Roxy and Axel. I mean seriously XP kyahh XD

Hmm... A part two to this would be absolutely lovely.

Very nice, love the slash _

- A reviewer

More please? Fantastic writing.

Hello! Just read your story and thought it was great! I have one quesetion. Are you going to continue this story? If you are, you can write back.

Oh my, this was enjoyable. I loved the love/hate of it - I get that same feeling from their relationship (that they would've either been immedietely on good terms or immedietely on bad terms) and this story was a nice spin on it. I'm not normally one of AU's, but you have a good grip on their characterization and a nice writing style! Great job! :)

XD

Great.

I can't describe it. Just abso-friggin-lutely great.

LOL! That's really funny!

Perfect!

*laughing hystaricly*

The meeting was perfect, the kiss was perfect, and the ending was perfect.

They hate each other, and yet...

*shakes head*

That's going to be one interesting relationship.

Awesome.

~The Critic, Zoa

...Wow. I loved this! I have no idea on what else to say about this fic except that it was just...great! Here *gives you a bag of cookies* You've earned them :3

Keep it up!

that was great! the begining of a love/hate relationship! please update soon!