Great story!

...I was doing something.

I came to for a reason, dammit! But now I can't remember what it was because I was distracted by the pure awesomeness of this fic...

Damn, 2008? That was a very long time ago...Is this fic discontinued?

ah make them get together im tired of waiting! update soon _

Yay~ I just started reading and already I caught up and hooked! I am glad to see a good story out there! I am tired of lame-ass kids writing stories with out of character characters and others with the most random stuff!(ex. naruto's long lost sister, or sasuke and hinata being related... though then story was ok)I am glad to finally find something that sparks my interest!

This is the best. I can't wait for the next chapter. I love your writing-style. It's charming.

Does Sasuke have red eyes in this fic, or did you just mean he was red-eyed because he was tired or something? But Naruto said his new friend had red eyes... though I doubt Sasuke has a tail. *laugh*

Oh, and is Itachi just over-protective or a control-freak or something? And you will let us know why Sasuke doesn't like him? Did he see Itachi kill their parents? Or wasn't it Itachi who killed their parents at all?

And was it Sasuke who was unseen in the fog in Naruto's dream?

By the way you didn't mention Sakura in this chapter. I had thought Naruto would try to ask her out or something after the café incident. I was wrong. Is it Temari that is the waitress?

And I just wanted to ask if this is sasunaru or narusasu. Usually it is pretty clear already from the start when you read a fic, but I haven't managed to figure it out in this one. Just out of curiosity. I don't mind either way.

Update soon, pretty please? *puppy dog eyes*

Can't wait for the next update

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You made a major French mistake!

It's not 'fruit de la mer', it's simply 'fruit de mer'.

As for the sex, it's 'un fruit de mer', since you have to use the sex on fruit, which is masculine.

Other than that, it was a terrific chapter, though you really made me curious about the relationship between Suigetsu and Naruto!

X-Keep on writing!-X

I like the story I know it's not the most constructive criticism, all I can is I'm reading it. The Kyuubi-personality things is a bit odd, maybe you could refine it, it's a good aspect but it lacks *something*, I saddly can't put my finger on it. But some of the french grammar bugged me, and as being a french, I figured I'd give the actual grammar. (But I really understand, these traductors aren't great and french is quite hard.)

As such, we usually don't say 'Un sac' it's 'Une sacoche' for purse. ;) 'Un sac' is a bag. And well 'fruit de la mer' is for one masculine,and two is quite quite literal : We usually remove the 'la'. (Actually I never heard someone ask in the grocery store 'Où sont les fruits de la mer ?'...) That was for exactitude's sake. ' I'm from french-canadian origin.

yay another chapter. simply stupendous.

hmm how does suigetsu know about naruto? did he meet kyuubi? was naruto talking about sasuke in his therapy? if ebisu wasn't so snappy then he might get somewhere! what happens when you get too much of a drug you don't need? cause sasuke isn't imaginary, so he upped the dosage for nothing! can't wait for more! please update soon!

Awesome chapter. I liked the Big Brother reference.

next chapter! next chapter! plz!

The way Itachi asked- no, demanded for that pizza... god, that was funny! I really can't wait for more. I just really do love your writing style! _!

Ok, ok...my mind was wandering down Gutter Lane when I was reading. Hehe. Don't ask. XD.

So, I came across un sac and I died. You still have me laughing like a drunk idiot. Lol.

Gr...I can't use puns in writing. I don't even notice when I'm using one. Un seafood made me laugh too. It made French sound like Spanish for a sec. You know? Like how Spanish words are so similar to English. You make me such a happy camper. o

Great chapter!

Can't wait for the next one!

"It’d be like asking a snake to be friends with a frog.

Who said snakes and frogs couldn’t be friends?"

I loved this part! A Jiraiya and Orochimaru reference! I'm surprised others havent picked up on it yet! I read it and I just started laughing for no reason other than the sheer relevence of it! Keep working, I really like how this is going so far!