Pure, so sad... but oh, so beautiful! The Mirai is such a dark, sad, lonely timeline... but it was certainly not empty. Look at these two... wow, you've captured their relationship with such beauty and feel... and you did the same to that of Gohan and Trunks.

Incredible! Great job!

This is amazing.

This was a true tearjerker. I'm crying! *blows nose*

Flawless, heart wrenching, and utterly canonical. I am in awe.

*sob* Oh man... that was just too sad... I think I'm crying... I am.. ok... THAT WAS SO DAMN SAD! you are GOOD! scuse me... i need a kleenex.

wow, i almost cried when piccolo died. great story.

That was...wow. It struck a chord. Great job.

Beautiful.

omg.. this story is so sad! I was crying! anyway.. GREAT job! i absolutly LOVE it! Keep up the awsome work and keep writing!

P.S you displayed such beautiful emotion!

~Demi

Hehe, me again. Beautiful descriptions. I loved it, very nice. You've definitely got some talent. I have to get off for tonight, but I'm definitely gonna check out some of your other stories tomorrow.

The passion, so very nice. I loved your descriptions of Piccolo, and...well, everything. XD Very nice

Wow. This piece is stunning. The relationship between Sensei and student, mirrored, was haunting and unbelievably well portrayed. Absolutely amazing.

*sniff8 Very sad *sniff* but so good

My God i'm crying! this is what you've reduced me too! How dare you! Wha, so sad!
Now write trunks' point of veiw! **sniff sniff** Wha!

'Even my bloodless grip on his hand couldn’t keep his soul and body together.'
Dear God, that line tore my heart open and made me shed black tears. *Holds Piccolo to her breast and strokes his bald head lovingly* At least we know this green angel has peace.

Very well a sad story.