| Reviews for The Trouble with Deadlines |
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JRLink chapter 1 . 1/11/2017 This made me smile, it was a really sweet story. I always pictured Riley as a person that would get sick just because he had a deadline to meet. Lucky him for having Ben but otherwise I think Abigail would take care of him. Take care and see you in another story |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/6/2013 I wonder why you said it had a little slash? I saw no slash, just some this brothers would do for each other. Or a father for a son. Still one of my favorite stories. |
Roxanna123 chapter 1 . 9/7/2011 Awwww! Thats so cute. |
milkteethbabydoll chapter 1 . 8/12/2010 Aww, this is so sweet. I like the tiny-bit of slashyness thrown in there. Easily overlooked by anyone that isn't a fan, but just enough to satisfy the fangirls. ;) |
scberg chapter 1 . 1/29/2010 Wow, really good! I loved the details. |
hogwartshobbiton chapter 1 . 10/3/2009 aww cuteness :) thankyou xx |
CuriousCate chapter 1 . 1/12/2009 How did i not know that you also wrote National Treasure fanfic? And Ben/Riley at that? lol, anywho, fantastic job (like i'd expect anything less from ya:D) "Riley laughed in embarrassment and slid beneath the sheets, blinking up at his best friend with fever bright eyes. “Are you going to tell me a bedtime story?” “No, but I am going to make sure you go to sleep. Scoot over.”" That part made me smile:) |
storylover18 chapter 1 . 12/27/2008 It's pretty good. One of the more in character stories I've read. |
Authorwhohasntwriteninyears chapter 1 . 7/9/2008 I liked it. I thought it was cute. I like Ben and Riley togehter even though Ben totaly takes Riley forgranted in the movies. |
wooljumper1992 chapter 1 . 6/23/2008 As a rule, I don't "squee", but if anything was ever going to make me "squee", it would be this story. It's beyond sweet. I love it. |
Bloody Koalas chapter 1 . 3/13/2008 Oh-kay, I don't know if you had slashy intentions but...this is very much slash. Good slash, though :) Nice job! I'm glad I don't have a Ben in my life...otherwise I'd NEVER finish my fanfictions! ; ~Hadley |
Triden chapter 1 . 2/25/2008 Gah! I love Ben/ Riley fics! and yours is awesome! Please write more! |
Majestik Moose chapter 1 . 2/16/2008 Oh wow. I read this like...a week ago. I can't believe I didn't review. Ugh. Anyways. I LOVE THIS STORY. Perfect characterization and very fluffy cuddles. The perfect qualities in a story _ |
Sveedish Chef chapter 1 . 2/4/2008 Aw, how cute. I LOVED the way you wrote about Riley drawing a blank - that's EXACTLY how it feels! Excellent job portraying it. I could definetly sympathize. That's actually what I was doing all last night... until 4 am... ew. Poor Riley. One tiny thing that plucked at my brain was that I don't think you can get a fever that high simply by sitting in front of a window. I could be wrong. But I thought a fever was the result of an infection in the bloodstream, and the heat was your body trying to kill off the infection. So maybe the coldness exacerbated (I hate that word) a preexisting condition. Maybe his immune system has gone downhill because of lack of sleep and proper meals and he's started developing flu or pharyngitis or some such form of fun. Eh. Again, doesn't really matter. Still love this to death, it's so sweet! |
Lady Halaia chapter 1 . 2/1/2008 aw! This so cute! |