| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone |
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Guest chapter 1 . 8/25/2019 Muito foda Adorei continuem assim |
Blue00Phoenix chapter 18 . 10/2/2018 World: YOLO Tom M. Riddle: What’s that mean World: You Only Live Once TMR: Noooooooo * Makes Horcruxes, gathers an army, becomes a dark lord* Lilly Potter: I love my son! *Dies* TMR: Die Harry Potter TMR dies World: I told you so WorldC. Fudge 14 years later: Dumbledore to Fudge: He’s back Fudge: HE IS NOT BACK YOLO 4 months later Voldermort (Yes I know I said the name. Stop staring.I’m back in your face Mr. YOLO |
Blue00Phoenix chapter 18 . 10/2/2018 Dumbledore: Dumb as a bell or dumb as a door |
Guest chapter 14 . 7/30/2018 FUCKING DUMBLEDORK! He never punished Malfoy crabbe and goyle for attacking Neville! DAMN HYPOCRIT |
Guest chapter 10 . 7/7/2018 Last chapter you had Harry getting a broom for Christmas! This chapter he got the broom for his birthday? Ron is a trouble maker- why did you let him befriend Harry? And why was there a lock on the bathroom door? |
Guest chapter 9 . 7/6/2018 Doesn’t Harry think Ron is being a bully to hermione? Ron gets Harry in to more trouble than Malfoy does! |
Guest chapter 5 . 7/3/2018 So you need to correct a wrong! As you wrote: no one would notice Harry unless HE revealed his name to them! BUT when Hagrid said Harry’s name in the Leaky everyone turned to look! So which is it? Harry reveals his name? Or anyone says Harry? |
Jim Red Hawk chapter 17 . 3/30/2018 In reference to your note at the top, the answer is simple. I almost never read a story until it is finished. One of my problems is I hate to wait on anything. There are enough finished stories to keep me occupied until the ones I am waiting for are finished. I must say I am surprised you killed Snape. Even though a lot of authors write him as a ‘good’ guy, I will never see him that way. He deserves what he gets. JimS |
Jim Red Hawk chapter 9 . 3/29/2018 I have to disagree with you on matching Harry & Ginny. Even Rowling has admitted matching Hermione & Ron was a mistake. My point is anyone can make a mistake & Rowling made a bunch. I think the best 3 matches for Harry are Hermione, Daphne, & Susan. Take your pick. Harry needs a smart witch to keep him out of trouble. I will point out one more mistake Rowling made. WHY is GRIFFINdore’s mascot a lion instead of a Griffin? I have been a fan of Griffin’s since I was a kid. I was very disappointed to find out I could not have a Coat of Arms. Other than that, you have a good story going here. Thank you! JimS |
Jimbocous chapter 17 . 3/6/2018 Still a fine story. Thanks for a great (re)read! |
sbmcneil chapter 9 . 10/26/2017 I don't think Harry and his friends were acting like bullies. Hermione kept inserting herself in their friendship. Not wanting to be friends with someone who keeps criticizing you isn't the same as bullying at all. |
RHJunior chapter 6 . 7/18/2017 Trevor is a toad. Bit of an important difference... Frogs can swim. Toads can't. |
Thisisaprettylongusername chapter 12 . 7/5/2017 The part with "king of the Britons" had me laughing. I've been watching Monty Python. |
nayin1704 chapter 1 . 8/31/2016 Okay |
tristen chapter 1 . 10/9/2015 it is bad |