DUN DUN DUN!

please continue!

. . . . I don't get it.

Um. . .a bit confusing, but I still like it!

so lovely! a very believable alternate ending, (though i admit i still wished she stayed with him in the end. :)) favorite line: "i've been your victim all my life."

"He was tired of this charade. Tired of feeding the beast inside, hearing the man within screaming for mercy. So very weary of pretending not to care for this vile woman, who had stolen and given so much."

Amazing, seriously.

Continue?

this is a really goos story! i seriously felt like crying!

but there were a few times a was a little lost, but it was soo good!

I like.

I like the darkness of it. It's wonderful.

Well done.

interesting.

ah what happens next? this is really good and is putting me in suspense!

Very good start, I'm always interested in reading another alternate ending. Can't wait for the next part!

Amazing, please do continue my dear.