Read all four chapters. very good and you matched the scenes from Narnia very well to each child. Loved it.

Oh, I loved this! It's really hard to chose a favorite, but I think I might like Susan's the best because of the clay donkey that "Rabadash" made. I was cracking up. They're all wonderful, though, and it was a great idea.

Figures she would have a flash-forward about Aslan - and that, in this particular case, Edmund would be so likely to believe her.

:D

*Triumphantly* Ha ha! I figured that's what it was going to be as soon as I realized it was winter. Well, maybe it took right up until the Turkish Delight...

Tee hee~!

Oh, so sweet~! This is lovely.

High King Peter encountered Narnia for the first time while learning to ride a horse.

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Derp.

I'm just going to add all your completed Narnia stories to my community and tell you here, rather than reviewing to say it on every individual one. So:

*bip* I have added this fic to my community. I like to notify people of this, since FF doesn't. :D

This was really good. Especially Lucy's. Go Aslan!

love your story - especially the Lucy chapter, it was the best. no you do not need to continue with this story as I think it is amazing just the way it is.

Oh this is good:)

I love it. It was really really good. I also enjoyed your style of writing. I think it's perfect, yet i wouldn't mind if you were to add more. Do you think you will?

I have no idea how to comment it. Seriously. And I mean it so great, your style and whole idea. You need to write more. For me XD

I like this part best of all. It nicely ties up everything. So fitting that Lucy glimpsed Aslan. And the end with her siblings, the lion roaring, trees rustling, "Someday," was perfect.

Great job done and thank you for this wonderful read. :D

The Hansel and Gretel reference in this chapter worked very well. (I'd never before realized how similar their and Edmund's stories are.) I really enjoyed you having Edmund getting along well with Lucy before the war. The interaction between them made me smile.

I think you wrote Susan very well. She had spirit. Your descriptions in this chapter were lovely. And it was so fitting that Charlie made a donkey. Nice foreshadowing. :)