| Reviews for Mark |
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RyanMK666 chapter 2 . 1/3/2017 8 years since this was updated, yet i'm still hoping one day it will get updated great story so far |
angeloneous chapter 2 . 9/1/2016 Any thought to finishing this story? It was a great beginning! |
Syd chapter 2 . 11/24/2014 This is great work. I'm really impressed with how well you kept everyone in character- not always easy to do, especially with complex characters like Bourne. You haven't updated this story for some time now, but I hope you don't abandon it. I would love to read more :) |
Gimlifan8 chapter 2 . 4/19/2013 You write Bourne's character so well it's amazing. Your story is the best one I've found so far among Bourne ffns. That interaction with Nicky was absolutely brilliant! Keep it up! |
Anya2Demitri chapter 2 . 6/29/2009 I am DYING for more! Seriously it's just amazing and I applaud your work! When Nicky was inspecting Bourne for any possible scar's, hot damn so much chemistry and sparks! I hope you will update this one day soon. 3 :) |
bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbvvvvv chapter 2 . 6/15/2009 Wonderfully executed (no pun intended!). You've captured well the flavor of Ludlum's pulse. I like this a great deal. I too am obssessed with the Bourne series. I highly recommend The Parsifal Mosaic. I've read all of the Bourne books, and interestingly I always felt that Parsifal should've been a part of the Bourne series. I read somewhere, some time back, that there was talk of making Parsifal part of the Bourne movies. |
Owl Emporium chapter 2 . 10/14/2008 This was good, actually. But YOU NEED TO UPDATE! Not good my friends. xD Angelica |
morningstar67 chapter 2 . 10/9/2008 I like it. The first chapter had me hooked. The chemistry between Nicky and Borne was palpable. Please write more. |
saicho-18 chapter 2 . 10/6/2008 i like this ] very cool but i guess i'm a little confused about the timeline..? i suppose i'll be needing to read more for everything to fall into place. update soon! ] |
TongTong3 chapter 2 . 9/12/2008 Very well written! Love nick/jason pairing! Please oh please update soon. More nicky the better and jason is super hot in this story! Keep up the good work! :) |
Frust-sheep chapter 2 . 9/11/2008 Oh yes the next chapter. *jumps up and down* I really liked the interaction between Jason and Pam and its cool to see Kirill again. I have to say Im so excited to know what happens next, so thank you so much moony for the update. It was a great chapter. :) |
Jedi Knight Bus chapter 2 . 9/10/2008 Whoo! All your editing made it what it was on its way to being, and it was very good. Tres, tres bon. I love how his name is Kirill...! the name of the cute scandanavian banker man at CIBC the other week. Heheh. The edit on Pam's getting home worked very well, the torture/(not really)/getting info scene was tastefully done and Bourne-like. Wahoo! One part I liked was the way Bourne slept in his hotel, because he slept on top of the sheets, dressed, and was very stiff and had his gun under his pillow or on his dresser (I don't quite remember). But that part was perfectly accurate. I really supermuch like this story, darling. |
Red Bess Rackham chapter 2 . 9/10/2008 Dude, SO cool. You write this so smart, it's completely absorbing and it's almost a jolt when the chapter finishes and I have to return to reality, lol. Question: in your summary, I believe you have called this story "postUltimatum", but then in your author's note, you said that Jason "hasn't learned Russian, he's still pretty early on in his career as an assassin yet"... was he not an assassin at the beginning or "preIdentity"? And he's still kind of an assassin? Just some clarification - probs me missing something. :P Um, but ya, SO awesome. Please don't wait 8 months to write and post another chapter. :D:D:D Luffs vous. ~Padfoot |
kitkatbaby611 chapter 2 . 9/10/2008 I like this so far. ) Keep it up |
SardothianStag chapter 1 . 9/6/2008 you've definately gotten my attention, its interesting and I like where this is going, your writing tyle is really good.. :) more soon..please Liesy |