I love wicked:)

Great story, loved it from beginning to end!

I liked it :) Very well done, Oh if Ron ever found out...

What a whore.

This was good and hot and i liked that there was storyline as well as smut. Also i'm glad that Hermione came to her sences at the end and admitted that although she craves Bill, her and Ron and meant to be! Yay!

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Not what I was expecting at first but very very good! :)

I really enjoyed this story. I wanted a little more though, another chapter maybe to round this all out.

nice

I really like this. :)

Kelly

Finally Hermione has her imperfections back. that comment has nothing to do with your writing or characterization other than I am thankful to you for describing her with them (I have been reading lots of Hermione fics lately and most authors don't give her any normalacy or imperfection other than bushy hair). Anywho.

You write very well and I enjoyed this little sotry very much.

thank you for sharing.

Poor Bill. His wife kicked him out, he can't claim his own kid, and his secret lover's pissed. And there's an evil wolf-side controlling him. I feel really bad for Ron though. He's under the impression that he's a dad, when really his brother has kids with two separate women, one being his wife. Yikes. This IS a rather screwed up family, eh?

this is the worst fic ever. perv.

I liked the story. you did a good job!

Good story! I never liked Ron and Hermione... I like how you paired her with Bill. Good job! You should continue this story (even though I know it's a oneshot).

Not bad, interesting take on rose being Bill's though. Congrats.