| Reviews for A Chapter in the Lives of Haruhi and Kaoru |
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   rini anointed436 chapter 1 . 4/30/2018 Just like how she went after Tamaki in the anime/manga, her behavior here seems believably in character. Strong emotions tend to override all rational thought, which is the case here with Haruhi taking the plunge to go to great lengths. It's better fitting for Kaoru to attend a business meeting since he has the mental maturity, unlike Hikaru, in dealing with various situations. At least Hikaru has the optimism in bringing good cheer when needed. Good job attempting a KaoHaru future fic. It's all the more sweet when they meet. Proofreading before submission would make this better in terms of sentence/grammar structure in certain places. This is one example of such: Haruhi in a simple summer dress. Hair pulled back in a casual half ponytail. She was smiling. It could've been better written by combining the phrases: Haruhi, in a simple summer dress with her hair pulled back in a casual half ponytail, was smiling. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/12/2017 I loved it plz write more |
| UnbreakableRose chapter 1 . 4/4/2017 I FINALLY FOUND A KAOHARU STORY |
| Intensify chapter 1 . 9/17/2015 I reall loved this story it's so cute, I hope that you plan on continuing it. |
| BlackCatNeko999 chapter 1 . 3/30/2014 Awww, she just couldn't say 'no' to the call of love! I enjoyed this for sure. Write more! |
| Midnight4568 chapter 1 . 11/27/2013 OH MY GOSH THIS IS PERFECTION! |
| Kawaiilila chapter 1 . 11/22/2013 Aww...That was absolutely beautiful! Please write more! |
| zon12 chapter 1 . 1/1/2011 Awww .. I love that it was Haruhi who did something so spontaneous _ Lovely! |
| vegeta's chew-toy chapter 1 . 10/28/2010 Awe, so cute! Finally a fic where Haruhi is shown to be passionate! Heh _ |
| TheBlindBandit999 chapter 1 . 7/20/2010 I wish you would have done more... I love this pairing to no end |
| BD-Z chapter 1 . 7/18/2010 awwwwww.. a million times awwww. That was too precious. very well written by the way. The story flowed smoothly. |
| d-b chapter 1 . 11/9/2009 continue :D PLEASE Haruhi is sweet and haa! to that other lady you mention, |
| Music is my Insperation chapter 1 . 7/14/2009 So... Kawaii! Oh my gosh, THAT WAS SO CUTE! |
| hitsugaya07 chapter 1 . 1/28/2009 I love it! it's so sweet! I would love if you would continue this story... and I'm wondering when are you going to update your other stories? anyways, thanks for putting up really good fics! |
| ireadtoomanybooks chapter 1 . 12/8/2008 I think you should make this longer. I would love to find out what happened in the next few days, or if this happened again! I really like it :D |
