What a great story. Loved the physical whump for Shep and the emo whump for Ronon. Very gritty and intense. Really liked your descriptions of the surroundings,the storm,and the old woman. Great stuff. Well done. Cheers! }:O

Raven

Excellent. One of the most enjoyable John/Ronon stories I have read. It's such a shame there are so few good John/Ronon stories about. But like the show fanfic writers tend to ignore the John/Ronon friendship for John/Rodney which has been overused now IMO thus turning me off them. I hope you write more John/Ronon stories as you really have Ronon's voice down pat. Thanks for sharing.

Oh. That was an awesome idea. Very creepy indeed. Your OOC was cool too. Very nice work.

Seriously, this was fanominal. You were very in character, with both Ronan and John...That is exactly how I imagine Ronan when he is vunerable...This was sweet yet sad, but written very ingeniously. Wonderful!

Fantastic. The descriptions of everything just put me right in the room with Ronon. I could see and feel everything. Loved the grumpy healer. She was fantastic. I do believe Ronon's biggest fear would be being helpless.

A well written story as all your work I suppose. That storm makes me feel unease, even reading about it. Wow, you know how to use words. :-)

Thank you, you made me believe.

I absolutely loved this! I recently wrote Rod & whump!Shep and am now obsessed with it, so I went on the hunt and this is the first thing I've found and it was great. So, utterly, fantastically, great! Thank you so much for writing this!

Very nice. Good to see the side of Ronon that Melena obviously loved (we knew it was still there). And having grown up on the Montana High Line, I'm familiar with winds like that, and windchill factors of -60 and worse. :)

Whoa, way good. :)

Man, you keep churning out these quick stories that just keep getting better. Way to go!

This was very chilling with the wind being the Siren calling to Ronon first and then Sheppard.

Again, good job with this. :)

Nice. Very, very nice. :)

This was really really good. You can write Ronan like no one I've ever seen before. It was beautiful. )

i love that this story revolved around sheppard and ronon kind of like this weeks episode lol love it great story as always :)

Very nice. Elegant writing, very visual...and always love how you spin a new character into the mix. Loved Ronon in this and how he took care of Shep, with no reservations. Pure loyalty and compassion. As always, thank you for writing! :)

Very good.