wow air raid talking sense into TC of all things and I thought this was TC's little one since skywarp was too big? any more preggo bots?

I wonder what starscream is planning with plan b?

geeze they had access to the internet this whole time, still this was another good chapter.

that was the most interesting conversation I've ever heard coming from screamer's mouth.

and flight's pregnant? well shit didn't anyone tell them to use condoms? ugh. so much for mr. seahorse

:s

poor skywarp :(

neon green soda that tells him to clean up? silverbolt you crossed into bizzaro world the minute you became human

well those boys know how to treat s girl on a date, interesting to hear about TC and Screamer being brothers, poor aerialbots wishing for the sky. will any of them get back to what they were? this was equal parts sweet and sad

lol

so starscream is teaching advanced mathematics to humans? on the hand he'd be the best damn teacher ever, on the other, he'd be probably be the meanest and most impatient

Now I realize I don't comment most of the time I read this story, but...I'm gonna do so now. So... after 3 (?) chapters of the whole pregancy thing, I am not sure that is the direction you should have chosen. The story has been fun and enjoyable, even without a lot of back story, up to that plot point, but the pregnancy thing seems forced or Cliché perhaps? Definetly forced, like you ran out of ideas? Yet you have had some wonderfully done scenes handling that turn of the storyline, just as fun as many others. So obviously, I'm not a fan of the turn in direction there, but it will certainly provide you a challenge and will be intersting to see where you go with it.

Thank you for sharing the story, and your writing.

The rewrite is a great idea. There's some wonderful scenes and some great lines in this, but, though I could see what you meant to do with the genderbending, all the 'he's' made it impossible to keep track of who had been changed into a woman and who had been changed into a man when they became human.

and here I am feeling guilty that I haven't reviewed the last few chapters. Seriously, I came close one time, but I had to leave my computer to go to work, and when I came home, it had shut down. So if it isn't obvious, I reread the whole story. I know you are doing a rewrite, but I have two questions: one, it sounded like only TC went 'all the way' with Flight and he wouldn't let Warp. Two, is Megatron in a male or female body?

Also on a side note, when my husband worked security at the hospital, he yelled, "Look, a distraction!" to a distraught psyche patient, and it worked. Or was he a drunk? I can't remember.

Glad to hear you aren't totally abandoning the story. I like how you explore the relationships and personalities of all the characters. And I can understand the need for a rewrite. I got a few fics in need of that too.

Good luck with it and I hope to see something soon!

Wonderful story! I love the way that Starscream describes his two different approaches with his wingmates. Though I am wondering exactly what job Starscream got for Slingshot. Looking forward to more. Would love to see more about what is happening with the other Autobots, especially after Ratchet & Wheeljack realizing just how the human reproductive system works. Prowl's reaction would be spectacularly entertaining.