Strange Fanfic. I was unable to understand it, even as I thought that it was amazing.

Is this the fabled antinovel?

I really really wanted to be able to read this as all the foundations for the multiple storylines seem really well written and the storylines themselves have me really interested, however I am completely unable to follow the story with so many shifting perspectives so rapidly. I'm stuck trying to sort out what happens in each timeline and not get anything mixed up as well as identify each character when many aren't even named in that section of the chapter. It doesn't help that my knowledge of Fate and Tsukihime is limited but normally one would explain a rough outline of a character when the character is brought up in the story to help those that may not know that character. It also doesn't help when there is multiple deferent versions of one character mentioned within just the one chapter. The only fault this story has is that it's not well paced with the shifts of worlds and there's not enough explaination for what's happening in many scenes. So much is left to peice together yourself that I find myself buried under to many questions and not enough answers. So sadly I can't read this despite how much I really want to. However I will say the writing itself is absoulutly awesome. Just needed to make more sense is all.

I enjoy, appreciate abstracts btw. ahahahah

Beautiful, words cannot describe how it resonated with me... Of promises, time, life and death.

Well, this is making no sense at all to me...

I'll just say this, i have no idea what's going on.

It's beautiful I'll admit, but i don't understand most of it.

I suggest putting an author's note in every chapter to explain the scene. You don't have to be specific, just enough for readers to get the picture.

It's a shame I can't appreciate the poetic scenes because I can't understand them.

...lookiin at the other reviews..i think grey muji was using hallucinogenics while reading this...

okay seriously..what the fk...is this the mind of the Second magic's master or something..whole story makes no amount of sense. Im not even sure if this is an actual story and not just a plotbunny line..

Beatifully tragic.

A beautiful, live that could give 'The Raven' a run for it'd money! A poetic masterpiece that showcase the macabre too the fullest, while still being incredible sad/depressing.

... Amazing. The emotions, swept me away... Simply beautiful.

So Fate/Prototype Saber and Fate/Stay Saber vs berserk Arc? Truely that would have been a sight to behold.

This chapter was completely incoherent. At least try to have a semblance of unity.

Okay, your story is written well with good grammar, spelling and format. It's also very poetic and all but... well... I can barely follow it. It is extremely disjointed and confusing. On top of that, you've got a bunch of different stories going on that keep interchanging, which frankly makes it even more confusing to follow. I end up going "what the hell is going on?" at least once every chapter. Could you try to organize this better? It'll make more sense then.