| Reviews for Vampire Older Sister |
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  Guest chapter 2 . 5/8/2016 Plz continue this series! I love it! Have a great day. |
 ifairyu chapter 2 . 8/11/2008 YOU DONT HAVE TO BEG FOR REVIEWS WHEN UR WRITING IS THIS GOOD! PLEASE WRITE MORE, I WANT TO KNOW HOW ITS GOING TO WORK OUT BETWEEN ASHLEY AND ALEX! I KNOW ITS BEEN AWHILE SINCE YOU UPDATED, BUT IM BEGGING... PLEASE UPDATE SOON OR IM GOING TO FREAK! |
| buckichick22 chapter 1 . 2/28/2008 yea go alice |
| EmmettCullen chapter 1 . 2/7/2008 BIG TEDDY BEAR? BIG TEADY BEAR? HOW COULD U? IM ONLY LIKE THAT NEAR U PEOPLE, CUS I WOULD HAVE QUITE A FEW BRUISES IF I DIDN'T CENSOR MY ACTIONS/WORDS, THAT OR I WOULDN'T HAVE ANY BRUISES AT ALL (YOU WOULDN'T BE MY FRIEND). |
| ann smith chapter 1 . 1/31/2008 your story is really good...please keep writing(and soon!) |
| sporkchief chapter 1 . 1/31/2008 -le gasp- ALICESAURIS! you didn't tell me you ha d another story in the works!I am ...pleasantly surprised! good plot, but it needs...something. Im not really sure...maybe some more details? ya know? a couple similes, maybe a metaphor here or there, add a couple of adjectives... other than that...good! ~the amazing and always entertaining...BEKAH! |
| Singerboi chapter 1 . 1/30/2008 This seems like it'll be really good! UPDATE! |
| AtlasandAdia chapter 1 . 1/30/2008 Interesting idea! Its not bad ) keep writing! |
