I loved this so much! Everything about it. 3 Nice work, dear!

I love it! :) For a first fanfic, this is superb!

I really liked this. Good job.

Aww, quasi-Davy-whumpage! *hearts* Kinda sappy, but the world could use a little more sap (and it's certainly in the spirit of the show! _~) This was fun. And although it wasn't the focus of the story, I love how you write Mike.

Wait...you say this was your first fic? Awesome job! I wouldn't have guessed. It's really good! :D

I got about halfway through this before I realized that I read this yesterday on the Monkees Fanfiction Live Journal. I didn't leave a comment then, so I thought I would now. It was pretty good, keep up the good work!