was it because when she died he had died too?

that's what im getting at, its probably like wayy off though. haha

great story, i literally shed tears as i read the last part.

its soo sad. :'(

i loved it though

OMG! I love it! So sad... POOR TROY! :(

but I still don't get why the 'he,his' are bold in the part where she was still alive and italic when she died..still dont get it... could you message me and tell me why? thanks:D

~LA2021~

lani!

this IS so different from anything you've ever written, but i really really really like it.

aww, the last thing about the photograph of sharpay's tombstone..:[. that's so sad.

i think my favorite line was:

"...she almost cried.

But her tears had run out long before he even cried his first tear because of her."

AH. i love that line. and this whole thing. i like troypay ONLY if it's well written and not OOC. even though them together would kind of be OOC, but never mind that. :D

what was she sick with? aw, when she was dying and he said he loved her and she said "no you don't, but thanks love" or something. aw that was so sad/good/sweet/depressing. it was like perfect. i liked it a LOT. :D

i can't believe he waited 10 years to go visit her. and the whole thing how he told gabriella that he and sharpay were just a "fling"? that was SO SO sad.

gah, i love this. oh, why DID you use the bold when she was alive, and italicized when she was dead? that's interesting that there's a reason behind it.

heart you!

:]

-Kyla