a good start

Interesting alternate ending. I like ti so far, and it's still in character. I hope Akane gets her memories back soon. The amnesia plot is over-used by too many people.

I love it! Akane better be really alive! Please?

Hmm, this was interesting, although its too early to tell for me to say that the story is excellent. But i will say that i liked it very much and i hope it turns out with Akane and Ranma together in the end.

So good, but where can I find the 38th manga in english? Where! I have been bemoaning the fact that I will not be able to read it until I'm like thirty because I know no japanese. Please give me a website or something. Story is awesome.

Well, I'm stupid so I haven't figured out what saisei means, but I'll ask my mom or something. Anyway, great story, and you must've done some serious research of Chinese geography, haven't you?

Very intriguing story...can't wait for the next chapter.

I love this story! You have to continue it, PLEASE! I really, really love it and in complete and totally suspence as to what happens next. Please write more soon!

Oh my goodness...so dark and eerie at first. But I had to take a look. And when curiosity got the best of me...I went and looked up 'Saisei'. And. Whoa! Knowing this I just have to keep reading! I'm no good with cliffhangers!

Good idea, I want to see where this will lead

Oh! This is very good! The only thing I want to point out tho is that I think you meant horizontal (left and right) on the ground and vertical (up and down) in the air, right? Other than that minor insignificant little error, I really like your writing style! Keep up the good work! _

wow, you've definately got me interested. good writting too, and it (shock) it isn't a song fic! amazing! now if only i could find the time to get my own non-song fic back on track. sigh.