OMG CONTINUE! I loVE IT~~~! I wanna read more! I know it's selfish but, it is all your fault for writing this piece of pure WIN!

This story is really interesting, is there any hope of more coming from you?

Aww i wonder... will you continue? I'd really like to see more please! :3

Great story! hopefully there is still hope that you will update this! :D

I discovered your story today and read all 3 chapters and must say that this is a great fiction! I really enjoyed it and hope you continue it.

So... is there more of this ever to come?

You know, I really thought they'd keep him, so now that Starscream's free, I'm quite interested in what you'll do to achieve what everyone's waiting for ;)

I liked Ratchet's part best, somehow, and your version of Prowl is still one of the most interesting I've seen.

Ah..Starscream is going home...I anticipated something more interesting, but this's good too. :)

This chapter is excellent! I said before that you did a good job of keeping them in character, and that's just proved more and more.

Also, you wrote Ironhide's accent in without making it ridiculous. Good job!

Ratchet was particularly good in this as well.

This is one of the first Optimus/Starscream fics I've read that hasn't butchered either Otimus or Starscream's characterisation. I really enjoy what you've written thus far, and hope to see more in the future.

Added to my favourites and my alerts.

I'm just glad you went back to writing this because I thought you had forgotten about it and I was like this is such a good story please keep going! But I understand if its going be awhile until an update. College is tough, my bro talks about it all the time and I'm freaking out about it because in two years I'll be going so take your time. School first then fun you know and this chatper is great! Even if it did have the really big and complex college words in it like 'realpolitik'...I had to look it up but hey when you got brains why not show them off? I can't wait for the next but please dont stress out about it. Have a nice day! :)

Finally, chapter 2 updated! Please update regularly...I'm really interested in this story!

I must say that I had my doubts about this story ever being updated, but I still had hopes and so I kept it on my watch list. I am very glad that I did keep my eye on it! This story sounds like a good one and I am anxious for the rest of it! Keep up the great work!

I really really like the looks of this story (though I DO wish the chapters were a bit longer).

The characterization of Optimus and the other 'bots' are really good, and the fact that the story takes place 'back in the days', is a really interesting and original twist.

M... Optimus/starscream - my favorite, and their interaction in this story is really well-written.

All in all... great job! And I can't wait to see more. :-)

~KaraQ

Thank you for the update!

Among many things I like about this fic is that you portray Autobots in such a non-idealising way which makes you feel for them and their ideals much more than some "gung ho heroics" fic ever would.

You really had a poignant "landscape of war" description there.