Although I really wish there was more or at least an epilogue, this story was VERY good! Ur very talented and it was well researched and very well written! Although I did however get lost in ALL the names and people I rather enjoyed it ;) Hugz from Texas ;)

Great story!

But ummm...I hadn't read any part about Maaya knowing that it was Kyouya who gave her the gift...but maybe it's just me too excited to read that I read too fast... O.o

WooHoo! I LOVE THIS! I'm crying tears of joy and emotion here,*Sob* This is just too good!

!I LOVE THIS!

wow i stayed up...much to late reading this so its like 2 hours past my bedtime i shall have to sneak up to bed !

what can i say your story was WAY too addicting ! _

great story though there were so many charcters i dont know how you kept track of them all ;)

Aw that is a cute ending I loved it!

You should make a second part to it I want to see Kyouya's fathers reaction whe he finds out about them :) it should be fun reading!

Ahh, good story. Now it needs an epilogue or a sequel. My MaayaxKyoya fangirliness is not satisfied. Or, you could make a twinsOCs story. I like those, too. In any case, it's been a wild ride. I really love this story, and am happy to have read it. You're an awesome writer who makes few gramatical errors. I'll probably end up re-reading this at some point. Here's to your next story being in a category I like!

*blushes and squirms* No, it wasn't too long. I've had to wait a month or two before, so this was fine. Yay, I love Maaya's note! Won't elaborate now! Will wait til next chapter! Good job! Gambatte, you can finish in time! XD

Kya~ I love this story! Great Job, Great Job! Now give me the next chapter! XD Jukt Kidding. Can't wait, though!

Ah! i got so confused with all this step sibling stuff! theres too many names for my little brain to comprehend! (T.T) My brain melted even more! but its still a good story and very well written.

p.s. Twilight rocks!

oh my god! this is such a kool story... one of the best on kyouya...

please continue with this story...

and Please update soon!

Maaya has way more issues to put up with, unlike Emiri. Emiri has a genetic disease like Maaya (I still don't know what to call mine is the problem) but Maaya has a more complicated family. Emiri's family consisted of 3 other people who are all . So... That makes it kinda worse in my eyes

jeez... I was reading it and I'm like... woah Maaya sounds like Emiri only worse! (Emiri's the character from my OHSHC story by the way

I like the story.

Its very entertaining and good.

Update soon!

You mentioned both Maaya Sakamoto and Twilight in the same chapter! (NICE!)

I like it. It's rather unique in a nice style. Update soon please!