Oh my good! That was amazing! Great detail! I have no complaints for this chapter and thank you so much to naru-chan13 for the idea with male extras and thank you for going along with it! Sorry about your poor hands but you just wrote the best chapter!
Quotes from this I noticed: "No need to worry", I love how you had Dawn say one of her famous sayings!
'The pain he had to endure' I would love a great explanation for this that I know you must have written!
'hey Gary, who's Joe?' Ash never fails with his bubbleheadedness...
"looks like Mr pervert here isn't the only one who likes it dirty" I love how Drew-the pervert of all perverts- said that!
Thank you so much for writing this!

That's alright, rip. As being a fellow writer myself I get it! Take a break whenever you want, you are the writer who is writing one of the best fanfics I have ever read! 'The Drews'. So Drew, loved it. I didn't really mind this extra chapter because I love this fanfic and want it to last as long as possible! Still, wait until the boys see the girls and their 'male extras'! Do I sense drama and jealously? Will Paul finally get to explain to Dawn and all of the eager readers his true feelings for her and what has been holding him back from showing them?

Nooooo clif-hanger! Thank you for writing this chapter! So many ship moments! And I knew Paul had a heart! No errors and yesssss the talent show(the moment everyone has been waiting for!

Awwwwwwwwww :'( :'( :'( sadest and cutest and most crushing backstory ever! The No Air lyrics TOTALLY suited the situation. Poor Dawn! Still, being a Paul-has-a-heart-sometimes supporter, I feel like Paul has a reason for every harsh word and action he did.

Yay guy pov! Yep, there is definitely some past meant to be explained(probably going to be explained in the next chapter). Can't wait to hear about the necklace! Also, poor Misty! Ash played his old usual blunt self and turned a blind eye to her asking him to date her.
May I'm getting revenge on Drew for being a pervert!
Dawn I'm getting revenge on Paul because he was rude to me after all that work I did to impress him at a talent show!
Leaf I'm getting revenge on Gary for being a pervert!
Zoey I'm just here to help and support...-_-
Misty I just want Ash to notice me and my feelings for him!(Rip Misty :'( )
(also: No errors I could detect!)

Oh my goddddddddd! Poor Dawn! Again, no errors that I could see so KUDOS! Why does Paul have to be so Paul?! Can't wait to read next chapter, eager for the face off between boys and girls!

It's alright, detailed is best! I totally love May, Dawn, Leaf, Misty, and Zoey's bond! No grammar or any other errors I could see and I just LOVED the Dawn X Paul and May X Drew ship that I think might come! I wish you luck and yay talent show!

The fic was very good. I somehow found myself immersed in the story. Thing is though, I will never stop picturing Paul as a harsh, merciless trainer with a team of aggressive Pokémon.

net time make a story about paul actually feeling sorry for dawn i mean i am a total dawn x paul person and for one let dawn not be embarrassed i feel so sorry for her right know and i just could not readed the end

p.s super funny and silly and tragic

I love this story sooooo much! But how on Earth can you write 42 PAGES?! ARE YOU THE NEWEST SUPERHERO OR SOMETHING? YOU'RE INSANE, BUT IN A GOOD WAY!

Paul reasoning, though . . . I don't get it.
Why did he have to be so mean to her?

Thanks for the awesome story! Can't wait to read more of them coming up!

Aww lindo

Thank you! This story is like, my fav. story ever! It is soooo fab, with the whole Dawn and Paul. But like, did the others like, ever learn the true meaning of that necklace?

;3 DIS IS SO BUUTYFUL