Reviews for Beyond the Veil
Gensplejs chapter 9 . 2/5/2019
great story. please update.
CatScratcher chapter 9 . 9/24/2018
Dammit a 10 year old dead-fic with decent story and OCs, I want more!
ImpEmp chapter 9 . 6/27/2018
This is a really cool AU story. IT would be amazing if you decided to continue it!
jadethetroll chapter 9 . 5/4/2018
good story
James Axelrad chapter 9 . 1/12/2018
This fic is a lot of fun. Thanks for the fun time I had reading it.
Uchiha Aimee chapter 9 . 7/8/2017
I have to admit that it's kind of disappointing that the last update has been quite a while ago but I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for writing it :)
cko2 chapter 9 . 8/13/2016
Intresting story to say the least. Thanks for sharing.
Guest chapter 9 . 7/13/2016
Great story so far! Any chance you might find time to post an update?
The Last Herald chapter 1 . 4/16/2016
Great story's. If you are still around I would love to adopt and continue your hp story's. Please drop me a pm hope you are well.
Guest chapter 2 . 2/20/2016
This is fic with a lot of potential and quite a few good scenes. I love the fact that there's no bashing, despite Harmony pairing.

But I do feel that the characters are a bit ooc in more core ways. Harry's being way tooopen about his upbringing, and way too ready to immediately believe he'd landed in another dimension. Also there's not nearly enough focus on the fact that Sirius and Harry basically killed their counterparts, and Sirius never told anyone but his wife. Never letting them know that they'd lost a friend in soem ways.

Still it's a fair start, and the next chapters will probably rectify the later.
Still, Harry's intial landing in this world and his reaction, and especially his tale to his sister, could use some rewriting to make everthing more believable.

Overall though, a good effort, and kudos for writing such a long story. Dimension travel never gets old!
Holly M chapter 9 . 10/3/2015
Hey, I was just wondering if you're allright; you haven't posted anything since October 12, 2008, almost seven years ago. I'm a little worried and I really want to read more of your HP stories. My favorite is Harry Potter and The Girl Who Lived (I want to read about what happened next), but I also like this one, partially because I share a first name with Harry's sister. I hope that you'll write more stories soon.

-Holly M
Mr.Baratheon97 chapter 9 . 5/2/2015
Don't stop there! It was getting really good...
carick of hunter moon chapter 9 . 2/23/2015
Even unfinished this is worth reading it is very well written but this is it a lost fan-fiction, doom from the looks of things never to be finished which is a shame for it had the potential to grow into an out-stand story.
Mionefan chapter 9 . 12/12/2014
I'm disappointed that you seem to have abandoned this story. I knew going in that it wasn't finished (and probably would never be) but I had hopes. The premise is too good to dismiss and I enjoyed what I read. The next part would have probably have Barty meeting Voldemort and getting has ass reamed, but the Dark Lord questioning where Harry got that amount of power and training.
losthpfanficwriter chapter 9 . 8/10/2014
Curses. I didn't check before reading this and now you have me hooked for a story that looks to be long abandoned :(
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