Love it :D

Hahaha! That was funny! Your writing style makes it all the more funny. "...grunt..." hehe :)

Heh! I liked that it was from her pov-this is my first Halo fic ever read, I don't know why it never occured to me to wander into this section before. Anyway, I liked this much, and am encouraged to read more from this section. And you, if you wrote any more, which I will check after this.

The only thing was I couldn't see the Master Chief saying that last part, it was a little to quip-y, but overall I enjoyed the fic.

hahah how charming. at the mention of multitasking i thought of how women are meant to be able to multitask well. lol :D

?i dont realy get it,it was short and needed a tiny bit of punctuation work, it has potintial though,u might want to consider rewriting it,it could realy be a good story

It would be funny if chief yelled "SHUT UP WOMAN!"