Know I’m a little late in reading this but goddamn... I’m a huge fan of Stephen King’s Dark Tower series and the rose was eerily reminding me of the tower... then you threw in “Flagg” and I lost it!

Good story man, reminds me much of Stephen Kong’s writing. Very good story. Can’t wait to read the rest.

This is confusing but still the best thing I read.

This is disturbing. It's still amazing

Obviously it's been years since you wrote this, but I'm re-reading this and I realized how frequently your characters "whispered". It's an odd thing, not bad, but just odd.

Yup this story fell and fell head into mediocrity

This story could have been great but The longer this story goes the further and further it falls into mediocrity

Wow, it's been 10 years since I read this.

Not going to lie, it's very different coming back and reading this, but that's inevitable I guess. Still love the story, but certain things about the dialogue and character interactions that aren't as smooth on this read through.

Still good though, overall. Your newer writing is markedly better.

Wonderful story. Really hope that you will write another series because you're one of the best authors on this site.

Interesting universe, they're certainly in need of a hero and Harry will probably fill that role, it'll do emotional damage to all in this world when he returns to his own world, but hopefully he'll heal some emotional damage by spending time with his family fighting like hell to kill Lord Voldemort. Poor lad can't catch a break.

Onto the rest of the story.

Oh man, the action is so thick you don't have time to rest, i need a break but I can't stop reading.

Oh man, what a great chapter.

This story is truly an "epic". It honestly feels like a chronicle of the beginning. You truly are a fantastic writer

you stopped me from dying when I was 17.

Thank you

No.

wow insane but very cool