I was really impressed by how you wrote this fan-fiction. The characterisations are spot on and you managed to make the romantic possibility between Livio and Meryl plausible. I also loved the plot of it all, and I can truly see Meryl feeling like she was in this one shot. Thank you for writing this, as it is hard to find tics with Livio and good ones that take place in the 'Maximum' universe.

This is very sweet! The whole thing is very plausible and they're both in character. I never thought of these two but here they make sense. Even more I'd like to read about them again, so if you ever write something about them again you'll have at least one reader _~ I hope you will!

I love it, it's just so CUTE!

Can you please write a sequel? D

What an interesting idea...I would really like to see where you take this plot.

And your writing style is both engaging and descriptive, two of my favorite qualities! _

I really liked that, great work Laih, you're a fantastic writer : ]

So, I know the end says "FIN" but I find myself really hoping there's more. You write very well, and the idea of Meryl and Livio together is intriguing. Plus, I just love this characterization of Livio, and I'd like to see more of it. :)

This, my dear, was absolutely magical. I found it well in-character for the both of them. It makes me feel sorry for Meryl - she would really feel like this, wouldn't she? "People talk to me just to get to Vash." And, while I know we both like Vash x Meryl, I like the "less than happy ending" with them here, for a change.

I also think that Meryl would do this - women's rights are probably a bit lesser-developed on Gunsmoke and Meryl would be great doing expose's on that. I like that Livio was rather vague as to what he'd been up to, and... I guess his "boyishness"...? He's a nice combination of imposing and polite.

Very nice. We need more good little manga fics like this.

Excellent, Laih. I like pace and characterizations. Better than expected, and my expectations where you are concerned are always high. Well done.