Reviews for Of Love and Wishes |
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ScarlettLovesRhett chapter 9 . 2/19/2011 Keep going. I hope you update a lot faster next time. Thanks for the update:) |
wakingsilentandresigned chapter 8 . 8/31/2008 I can't wait to read more. I love GAston being super evil. |
ScarlettLovesRhett chapter 8 . 7/27/2008 This is getting so good! keep it up:) |
LittleBlue33 chapter 8 . 7/27/2008 oh this is gettiing good |
Flaming BlizzardLogged Out chapter 8 . 7/26/2008 -Starts to scream- -Dances in joy- YES! AN UPDATE! :D Dang,I can't believe it was the Enchantress! And Gaston's scaring me...-Hides- Till next time,later~! |
ScarlettLovesRhett chapter 4 . 7/26/2008 This is getting good. |
dazzeling diamond chapter 4 . 7/19/2008 Oh my goodness...I hope Belle's ok! Again, great Gaston portrayal! |
dazzeling diamond chapter 3 . 7/19/2008 Wow. Gaston is uber vengeful! Really great character portrayal, of him, by the way. Just a thought you swicthed from present to past again...I think it might occurr generally when there is a sizeable amount of description, so try to keep dscribing in past tense and maintain that. Other than that, good work. Gaston is definitely vivid in your story, definitely in character. |
dazzeling diamond chapter 2 . 7/19/2008 Oh boy. It's Gaston isn't it? Oh dear. That was a really great sentence "That's what you get for thinking,". Just a thought, I think you switchd from past to present after you said "meanwhile". Just be mindful of tense changes. |
dazzeling diamond chapter 1 . 7/19/2008 Ooh. I do like the start of this. |
Flaming Blizzard chapter 8 . 6/13/2008 Oh..my.. YOU MUST UPDATE THIS!It's VERY unique,and I must know what happens next.:3 See ya. |
Jen.Lawrence.23 chapter 3 . 5/5/2008 this is a good story.. why is it most men with big egos tend to speak in the third person? Have you noticed that? Just like what you did with gaston.. good work! |
r0nnie234 chapter 4 . 4/26/2008 You made Gaston really evil. I like it! Even though you're not planning ahead, your story's going good. I can see Gaston doing these things. |
wakingsilentandresigned chapter 7 . 3/6/2008 THis is very good. Just an FYI the Master's name is Adam so you can call him that instead of master. Anyway I can not wait for more. BTW there is BATB section in Cartoons I belive. |
gkinuwriter chapter 7 . 2/22/2008 nice story so far. short chapters but nice. hope you update soon! |