LOL! That was positively awesome! Its by no means rated M in my opinion though... now, if Daniel had given in to her seduction, thrown her against the table, knocking all his books and papers off, and had his way with her, THEN it would qualify as an M story lol... anyway, I still very much enjoyed it! (Think about writing a "edited" version, eh? XD)

soso, you should continue!

i loved it.

cause it doesnt even go out of character.

lovelovelove it

Totally enjoyable. And very aptly named too!

I really do love little shots like this so now I'll just have to check out your profile

Cute! I think you write both characters very well.

How very devilish of Vala.

Daniel is most definitely doomed. Lucky him.

cute fluff! Loved the bunny slippers!

ahaha Vala's new addiction... BUNNIES! LOL cool

Delightfully visual, I could see her flexing the legs, admiring her slippers and driving Daniel wacky! I especially like the insight into Daniel's inward struggle against her actions. I would love to see more of this one! It was really well written and I totally enjoyed it! B

I thought this story was very well done and a great concept. I originally read it on Live Journal. Oh, and Return to Xanadu is one of my favorite DV stories, the trial and the reference to undomesticated equines both great along with so many other great ideas.

BRILLIANT! Laughed out loud at the last line, brilliantly done. Keep up the good work.

That's both hilarious and adorable! Nicely done. :D

*adds to favourites*