Great story but for me, I felt that Tenten could have been more emotional. I didn't really feel it when I was reading it

It would be great if Shikamaru end up with Temari... oh well...

Wow, your title is an oxymoron :D

I LOVED IT!

You did a great job, really. :)

Good luck.

BR.

that was a good story a side from that cheesy last line.

i like the fact that Kankorou's gay. my favorite part of this story

omg! omg! omg! i love it! i love your story!

love it. (:

very cute.

(besides the ShikaIno, yuck, I just skipped those parts. :P)

but it was good even so. :D

keep up the good work!

ZOMG, so sweet. This is an amazing story! I totally love it. It was awesome, and you'd better keep writing things like it!

Nice. It was funny with Kankerou being gay. Nice job!

Oh my...

That was so emotional for me.

Not quite sure if I liked Kankorou being the father.

But it does fit.

So sad when Haterou dies.

To bad it is ended.

I will make sure to read some of you other work.

Great job, keep up the great work.

-paperflower3

That story was so heart warming XD AWW! this is my 2nd time reading it and it's still rocks!

aww cute ending XD great work so keep it up

Izari*

YAAYYA!

Ojay I know it was a joke but if Tenten's name meant 1010, it would be JuuJuu. Tenten is little by little or something like that..._

I'm sad it's over...

Heh, the present didn't work!

aw...so sad that's its over...but love the story!make more!