Reviews for To Hold the Sun
willow chapter 5 . 11/2/2016
have you given up do you even live surely you haven't forgotten you're writing about the boy who never gives up please come back give this story life again.
Guest chapter 5 . 8/16/2015
What's taking so long did you forget about this I would love to see the next chapter and the continuation of this mushy romance.
Galactic Fractals chapter 4 . 10/4/2013
May I please adopt this story from you?
Galactic Fractals chapter 5 . 3/23/2013
PLEASE MAKE MAWR! LOVE THIS STORY!1 KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
sai chapter 5 . 7/18/2012
hope you update soon this story is as good as it's origin.
kohiookami2 chapter 5 . 6/12/2010
please continue! i love the story!
UmiNight Angel Neko chapter 5 . 4/14/2010
AWSOME ! MORE PLEASE !
Gravity The Wizard chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
Please Continue!
fried ryce chapter 5 . 3/26/2009
Funny... you have a great story written here. Its a shame you haven't updated in a while. Hope you get around to it soon.

I will be looking forward to it.

yummy,

fried ryce
AForgottenFairy chapter 5 . 6/24/2008
what the hell's wrong with the rabid rabbit? i dont think i'll ever want to SEE a rabbit again!
CharismaHarmony chapter 5 . 6/18/2008
I just want to say it's the kind of fic I would continue to read and review I like how it's in accordance with the original Naruto plot and you've certainly added some twist of your own. I like how Hinata have superhuman strength, and the way Kakashi described his students are hilarious!

Keep up the good work :D *thumbs up*!
Booze The Klax Knight chapter 5 . 3/26/2008
OMFG Monty Python!
Rowie94 chapter 5 . 3/11/2008
LOL! FLUFFY'S LIKE A MONTY PYTHON AND THE HOLY GRAIL TRIBUTE! ALL HAIL ARTHUR, KING OF THE BRITAINS!(hehe stupid black knight)
Rowie94 chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
HALLELUYAH! finally, someone who doesnt call the yondaime arashi or some stupid made up name! and kushina! yay someone got it right for once
NaruHinaforever chapter 5 . 3/10/2008
damn evil little bunny
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